He knew this would be his last chance

This is a short story I wrote in my year 11 English language mock, were i had to write a story from four given options and i chose
'write a story which begins...
He knew this would be his last chance'

I ended up with a 9! And my wonderful English teacher loved it
I'm really proud of this story
Also I used the names of two guys I used to play Fortnite with :) They don't even know

enjoy the story, i hate you if you don't like it ;)))