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-I have been in Wattpad for about a year now . Being on Wattpad , my wish was to have comments on my stories or have anyone to give my story a try and read it .... But life never works out the way we want it to be ..
You see , the one main thing I learned in Wattpad that this wish isn't just mine , everyone in Wattpad wants to be recognized and wish to have someone giving their story a chance ... We, the people of Wattpad tried a lot of things to have this wish granted , like Read 4 Read or Comment for Comment and Advertise their story in Share your story .. ok sometimes the things we did worked but not always ....
So here is where I come .. I will pick a story each week and try to read 3 chapters or more or less depending upon whether I like it or not . Then at the end of the week, I will post a review on the story I picked that week .
Basically , I will be granting Wattapader's wishes and spreading their stories and give people a gleams of what to expected from their story ....<3
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