Copy of "Forbidden Memories"

This is a story I found in my middle school email accounts Docs and I wanted to rewrite it. I'm trying to make it not so uncomfortable and confusing since when I wrote it I left a lot of the plot out but i'm trying my best. It's become a pet project to rewrite it and I would love to have it critiqued and for writing tips. I'm sorry but the beginning is really quite boring so please trudge through it.