Flightless Bird
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Complete, First published Jun 21, 2014
This is my first ever free-verse poem and this is very far out of my comfort zone. I'm used to rhymes and certain structures, certains standards not just letting anything happen, so some feedback would be awesome. Thanks! :)

Disappointment, devastation
Two people stand side by side
One man, one boy
Middle fingers and smiling tough boys facades
Looking into the camera's screen
High hopes made for the boy
Only seem to crumble
That tough boy stares you in the eyes
A misguided little boy melts your heart
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