Seize The Untouchable
Sarcasticrose14
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  • Parts 16
  • Time 2h 9m
Sarcasticrose14
Ongoing, First published Mar 12, 2019
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"And I've been sitting at the bottom of a swimming pool
For a while now, drowning my thoughts ..... " 

Madeleine Lana Ellington's happy place is the indoor swimming pool of the top floor of her building. She goes there to drown her thoughts when her mind is overflowed with them. One evening she learns news that will shatter her heart. Just in time she crosses paths with Cameron Levis McClain, a guy who lives in her building. His desire to help her is denied. No matter what she's going through Madeleine never sheds tears. Is it a sign of strength ? - A demonstration that nothing can break her down ?--
Maybe, yet they say ; "But a mermaid has no tears, and therefore she suffers so much more."

― Hans Christian Andersen, The Little Mermaid
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Adrift: A Little Mermaid Retelling

45 parts Complete Mature

Agnes Allore's passions are simple: music, first and foremost, rules her heart. Second comes her best friend Daniel, a servant boy. As a girl, Agnes can do as she wishes; her beloved father indulges her willful spirit, and her troubled mother hardly pays her any mind at all. But as Agnes leaves her girlhood behind and becomes a young woman, she learns that dark secrets lurk beneath the surface of her influential family, and none of what she loves can go with her into the dark. --- Daniel Serran is a waif and a wanderer. When he and his disabled father come upon the Allore mansion, they expect to be turned away, but magnanimous Master Allore takes a chance on them. It's there that Daniel meets Agnes, the young lady of the house. Compared to her dazzling mother, Agnes is plain; compared to other women, she's rude and she's wild. But there is something about her that draws Daniel in, and he will never be the same. --- Plunge into a dark retelling of "The Little Mermaid," embellished with mermaid lore. In a world where men's greed knows no bounds, there are few happy endings. FIRST PLACE WINNER - 2018 Iris Awards - Romance Category SECOND PLACE WINNER - 2018 Iris Awards - Overall FIRST PLACE WINNER - 2018 Mystic Awards - Romance Category FIRST PLACE WINNER - 2017 Romance Awards - Heartbreaking Category HONORABLE MENTION - June 2017 Rose Gold Awards - "Best Kiss" TW: Abuse and graphic violence

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