Mj's Story
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Last published Fri, Mar 15, 2019
Hi everyone! This is my first story I've ever written and I'm just looking for some constructive criticism. The uploads might not always be consistent but I'll try my hardest.
This story is about a junior in high school who is trying to survive his parents treachery while protecting his siblings.
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