this'n here's been revised so many times, it oughter be done but there's one word I can't decide on. also, this ain't no second-person POV: that narrator's got an audience y'all can prob'ly recognize
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"so you're telling me that- that thing is-"
"yup."
"and that must-"
"yup."
"stop interrupting me you, you...!"
"wow, i guess it must be hard to have someone tell you 'i told you so' for a change."