A class went on a excursion and the bus broke down, they were on a trip to a new park that just opened up. While stranded with no cell phone connection something appeared in the shadows they didn't know what it was so they built small shelters and they found old hatchets. they went to find food as they had eaten their lunches already at a playground,half the class went to look for help and they came across a small town and got help and came back and told the rest of the class. This is my very first story that i have ever done in my life. it may not be very good so i will appreciate it if people can leave friendly pointers on how to improve for future stories of mine.All Rights Reserved