waking up (ON HOLD)
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Last published Mon, Oct 6, 2014
what if I told that your whole life is a lie, would you accept it or would you deny?...
alicia a normal 18 year old, finds out she has been a puppet of the government, but not just her, but millions of others, she joins the group of revolutionaries known as 'the fallens', meets her friends from the past, but then she finds out she's more than just a civilian...
could they defeat their own government and set free all the civilians or not?
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