In the Water
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Last published Fri, Aug 10, 2012
Dawn Fay was the girl everyone loved. Beautiful, funny and smart— so when she is announced dead after some kind of ‘tragic’ swimming accident that no one saw except for an eight year old with the attention span of a fish, it’s no shock that everyone is upset.
People were quick to believe the stories and reports in the news. Dawn supposedly caught her foot on a rock deep out at sea and the waves were too strong for her. But what people don’t know is the kind of danger that lurks in the waters, and I don’t mean sharks.
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