Untouchable
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  • Reads 197
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  • Parts 4
  • Time 10m
Ongoing, First published Jun 23, 2014
Claire can not be hurt by others, she will not allow it. There are two people who can hurt Claire- herself, and the girl in the mirror.
Say what you want, it's nothing that she hasn't already heard from herself. 

Lia is what everyone wants to be: smart, athletic, popular, in 'love', and most importantly, beautiful. Any person in their right mind would want to be her. Except Lia. She doesn't feel gorgeous, she just feels....used. 


*These are only the first, very short chapters. I'm sure there are spelling and grammar mistakes, it would be helpful if you pointed those out to me. I didn't edit very much because I would have lost my nerve and not publish any of it. I would appreciate (CONSTRUCTIVE) critism. Thank you, hope you enjoy.
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