Fan-tastic Editor Dreamy
- LECTURAS 3
- Votos 0
- Partes 1
Continúa<5 mins
Última publicación dom, mar 24, 2019
Dreamy spews nonsense about her problems with different fan fiction from wattpad! From the ill format and grammatical errors to the bad concepts and horridly executed plot, nothing is left off this editors radar!
This book is to help young authors grow and develop. At no point should readers harass the creators in this book.
All works and media used in this book are under protected under fair use for commentary and criticism.
Requests will be taken. if you wish for me to edit yours or anothers story, please direct message me with a link to the work. thank you for allowing me to read your story, and i wish you luck with writing!
Todos los derechos reservados
#532
criticism
Únete a la comunidad narrativa más grandeObtén recomendaciones personalizadas de historias, guarda tus favoritas en tu biblioteca, y comenta y vota para hacer crecer tu comunidad.
Quizás también te guste
INSATIABLE
He brought his hands up and tucked my hair behind my ear. coming closer to my ear "Do i arouse you?" he whispered, making my knees weak "I can feel the heat radiating off you and i know you are soaking wet already" What the hell? Pushing him off me i straightened up and glared at him "You are now my boss starting tomorrow and i dont think it is appropriate to use comments like that with an employee." He suddenly jammed on the elevator emergency button, causing the elevator to stop. "Really? That would make this more exciting and easier. "I am attracted to you, you are attracted to me. Lets fuck and be fine" I stared at him wide eyed Has this man gone mad? I admit that he is hot and affects me a little but that doesn't mean i want to jump into bed with him, he is my boss for crying out loud and i really need this job" He was now standing in front of me with his face close to mine staring at my lips. I want to kiss you" He whispered making me feel chills all over my body. ***************************************************** Blake Greyson wasn't born with a silver spoon but he worked all his life to get to the top. Too as one of the eligible billionaires in Florida with his beautiful girlfriend Anna by his side every step away. Mellisa Wakefield is a young woman in her early twenties who is yet to get her life together. She fails miserably in whatever she does and her sister never misses the opportunity to remind her of how much of a loser she was until she got a job at Greyson's enterprise. Two different people tangled into a life of love, sex and betrayal.Concluida
Call me kitten (boyxboy love) ✓
Jamie is happy with life, he has everything under control and every day is the same, just like he wants it. He is a loner by choice, girlfriends and friends are overrated. Or so he thinks. But when the new co-worker starts to hit on him it all starts to crumble. The co-worker is sexy as hell, confident and totally out of his league. And a guy. This starts a journey into new aspects of life. To learn how to let go of control, to embrace the darkest desires without fear. And to fall in love with someone that calls you kitten. *The sequel is out - Make me beg* https://www.wattpad.com/story/293369610-make-me-beg == Links == All socials, and spotify playlist is on my profile! == Disclaimer == # This is a boy x boy story # Contains explicit language and content (+18!!) # Contains acts of BDSM, so if you're not into that, beware (those chapters will begin with a warning) == Rankings == Jul 19 2022: #20 IN #ROMANCE Nov 29 2021: #1 IN #GAYROMANCE Oct 24 2021: #1 IN #MXM Oct 22 2021: #29 IN #BOYXBOY Oct 10 2021: #3 IN #GAYLOVE (and I apologise for any misspelled words and incorrect grammar ^o^ )Concluida
15 Days With The Possessive Billionaire
"You are mine now. Just remember one thing nobody gets the privilege of bringing that smile on your face and touching you" he clenched his fsts and moved forward. My breath hitched. "I want to see you smile every morning and lie beside you each night. I cannot think of somebody more perfect for me then you are. Your my strength and biggest weakness. You complete me. I could do anything to bring a smile on your face and kill any man who brings a tear." I cant believe it, the college bad boy who had every girl on his feet wanted me. Suddenly his hand started moving around my thigh making circles on them. He leaned forward. Our lips were so close still he did not kiss me. What a tease! His finger was going to enter me when he stopped. ******************* When Ayan's friends challenge him to bed the new girl Veronica, the only way he thought would bring her close was a vacation away from all of them. It gets messy when feelings started pouring in. Veronica fell in love. Or I think she did. After all- Who doesn't want a guy who is handsome, caring and loves you like your his only possession in this world. Did he know she was pregnant? Read in to discover them trying to discover their own mysteries. This book is a roller coaster of love, lust, heartbreaks.Concluida
How To Not Fuck Up Writing a Story In My Personal Opinion
This is advice for all of those wishing to write stories on Wattpad, or if your wishing to improve your writing. This is also me venting my personal frustrations at people who do everything listed here in their stories.Concluida
Terrible Writing Advice // Wattpad Anime "critique"
Here you'll learn how to become a master of the art of writing fanfiction. These tutorials are 100% approved by the Herd mentality that poisons this platform. Rest assured! I guarantee you'll become one of the most esteemed writers around here, with ideas never seen before...well... except the other few hundreds that do the same stuff. BOTTOM LINE! Follow this guide and you too can become the most bland and unoriginal guy on Wattpad. You're welcome! Disclaimer:SARCASM in pula mea! Do not take this seriously! And yes, I'm making a parody after a channel of the same name on YouTube.Concluida![Site [REDACTED] (DISCONTINUED)](https://img.wattpad.com/cover/243174845-256-k764232.jpg)
Site [REDACTED] (DISCONTINUED)
This book has been moved to a second and better version of it here: https://www.wattpad.com/story/252972492-site-redacted This Site contains anomalies from all over the world, just like the rest of The Foundation Sites. We'll just get to have a closer look on what happens in Site [REDACTED]. Best Rankings: #1 in mcytau (11/12/2020) #1 in scpau (11/12/2020) #4 in scp (11/12/2020)(how???) TW: THERE WILL BE CURSING! I'LL TRY TO MAKE SURE I PUT TRIGGER WARNINGS WITH MORE INTENSE CHAPTERS! IF YOU NOTICE THAT A CHAPTER SHOULD HAVE A TW, PLEASE TELL ME SO I CAN ADD IT! !!!THERE WILL BE NO SHIPPING IN THIS BOOK, THESE ARE REAL PEOPLE AND THEIR CHOICES NEED TO BE RESPECTED!!! *This just means I might change the title later, we'll just see what happens.Concluida
Gardenia: A Review Shop
✿﹒Welcome to Gardenia: A Review Shop! ﹒ㄑ Get custom reviews to help your book gain the acknowledgment it deserves. With our well-experienced reviewers, you will have the best opportunity to learn from your own writing and earn feedback that will last you a lifetime. Whether it's a novel you've been sitting on for months, or something you've brewed for years, our reviewers are here to help! Get a review now and learn your strengths and weaknesses! Graphics by: @ReynaBennett Credits to: @-yunsnte, @dead_poet_7 **This work is not affiliated with Wattpad.**
Edit like an Editor: A Wattpad Featured Guide ✔
*A WATTPAD FEATURED GUIDE* *Highest Ranking #5 in Non-Fiction's HOT List* *Ranked #1 in #how-to, #1 in #editor, #1 in #publishing, and #1 in #grammar* • Do you find yourself with too many typos? • Do grammar and spelling tools not always find your slip-ups? • Is English grammar just not your thing? • Are you a victim of writer's block? • Do your characters' personalities fall flat? • Is your dialogue boring? • Do you need help staying consistent with your points-of-view? • Are you struggling with choosing the best genre for your work? • Have you finished your first draft and don't know where to go from there? • Are you in the bulk of your revising stage and could use some guidance? jgfairytales has compiled this guidebook together through her experience as an editorial freelancer and Wattpad editor and critic. She knows what the Wattpad writer struggles with. She wants to help you learn how to avoid those slip-ups again, and she does so with easy-to-understand writing. Learn how to edit your work like an editor through these chapters full of detailed explanations, examples, guides, tips, and practice questions from yours truly. After reading this guidebook, you will walk away with an understanding of (American) English grammar and the confidence to comfortably edit your own work. The end goal for every writer is, of course, publication. jgfairytales even has a few tips for you to reach that goal and how to stay on track. jgfairytales has grown as an editor and critic from college courses, textbooks, guidebooks, editing and critiquing others' work, and editing her work. All references used are cited, so you may also refer to them if you wish to. Copyright: All Rights Reserved by Jennifer Gioia Rowland © 2016-2018; © 2024 However, where credit is given, the copyright is (CC) Attribution-ShareAlike.Concluida
Put a Stake in it!
New Slayer! New Generation! This story is inspired by Buffy the Vampire Slayer. I do not own Buffy. All rights go to the creator and writers. But I do own this so do not steal. It won't be updated often. This will be rewritten and fixed. This is simply a rough draft of what I'm working on. So bare with me, please. I will put a real description in later. This is my first story I've written so it won't be perfect. I will accept criticism any and all criticism. Enjoy!
Dark Love
hey watt pad readers! I know my other story didn't seem to go as planned so I decided I'm going to write a new one and possibly resume the other if I have time! This story is going to be about a beautiful girl and her mistakes and challenges of becoming a young adult. let me know if you have any suggestions or feedback! Please follow and vote for me as well! I'd love to here your comments and read your stories. I will update as often as I can. just a warning it make get a little intense ;)Concluida
He brought his hands up and tucked my hair behind my ear. coming closer to my ear "Do i arouse you?" he whispered, making my knees weak "I can feel the heat radiating off you and i know you are soaking wet already" What the hell? Pushing him off me i straightened up and glared at him "You are now my boss starting tomorrow and i dont think it is appropriate to use comments like that with an employee." He suddenly jammed on the elevator emergency button, causing the elevator to stop. "Really? That would make this more exciting and easier. "I am attracted to you, you are attracted to me. Lets fuck and be fine" I stared at him wide eyed Has this man gone mad? I admit that he is hot and affects me a little but that doesn't mean i want to jump into bed with him, he is my boss for crying out loud and i really need this job" He was now standing in front of me with his face close to mine staring at my lips. I want to kiss you" He whispered making me feel chills all over my body. ***************************************************** Blake Greyson wasn't born with a silver spoon but he worked all his life to get to the top. Too as one of the eligible billionaires in Florida with his beautiful girlfriend Anna by his side every step away. Mellisa Wakefield is a young woman in her early twenties who is yet to get her life together. She fails miserably in whatever she does and her sister never misses the opportunity to remind her of how much of a loser she was until she got a job at Greyson's enterprise. Two different people tangled into a life of love, sex and betrayal.
Más detallesPautas de Contenido