Another World [ReUpload]

I'm not good at Describing a book, but I can give you a pro/con list of this book and being invested in this series I have planned.
Pros: It's a fun read full of different types of humor, action scenes, and a decent humanized plot line of fantasy and grounded reality.
Cons: It has pacing issues as it is the first in a series, I wasn't working in a comfortable Point of View, and it can be rushed and slow at the same time due to details being repeated a few times over as the person who I'm writing in.
Anyways, if the pros outweigh the cons or if you're just curious, please enjoy. Yes I already posted this, but I felt the needed to break it into the chapters I wrote.