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Below the Surface
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Ongoing, First published Jun 23, 2014
Gaby had everything at sixteen, a loving mother, her best friend Bella, and her other best friend Liam - someone she’s grown to have feelings for - a swimming scholarship at hand for college, what more can you ask for? Until their seventeenth birthday, when Gaby and Bella wish upon a shooting star to become mermaids. Now Gaby has everything and more, she has the sea at the palm of her hand. Who wouldn’t want to be a mermaid? Swimming around all day, no legs to shave, and long luscious hair.

Five years later, at twenty-one, Gaby comes back to her hometown in Lahaina, Maui from college for the summer. Things have changed for better and for worse. Especially when Liam comes back with a passionate hate for Gaby. 

The two struggle living on an island with unresolved feelings and problems, will they be able to mend their friendship and become something more than friends or will they just sink deeper into their troubles.
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