The Boat

The Boat

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Dedicated to individuals who suffer from domestic abuse. "Not All Wounds are Visible" A Note From the Author As one might read this short story it may be easy for the roles of the characters in this story to be misunderstood. The Boat follows a young boy who is living on a boat in the middle of the ocean. The boy believes that the ocean speaks to him with such elegance and perfection. With this constant echo-room that the ocean is perfect, the boy leaves land to chase perfection. The boy proclaims that the ocean is teaching him and telling him fascinating stories that only he can hear. This sounds like a sweet deal if the boy loves the ocean. However, throughout the story, you start to realize that the ocean kidnapped the boy and took him away from his friends, family and social interactions with other people. I wanted to use a metaphor for a toxic partner rather than actually writing about an abusive relationship so that the reader can interpret the story of how they please. This was my vision for the story and I wrote it in a specific way for more possible visions to be seen. I thought of the quote "Not All Wounds are Visible" because throughout the story the boy is never directly physically wounded but rather goes through stages mental oppression which leads to the outcome of the story. I also chose a male lead to symbolize that men can and are victims of domestic abuse. This was not an act of sexism, this was an appeal to sympathy. Men who are domestically abused receive a social stigmatism and thus are less likely to get the help needed to overcome this stage of their lives. I hope you enjoy reading. -Austin William Kraft
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I wrote this when I was 16 give me a break. TAKEN SERIES: BOOK ONE TW: kidnapping, manipulation, toxic/abusive relationship, violence, death, grief, self-harm, suicidal thoughts/attempts, sexual assault, non-consensual sexual content, alcoholism, stockholm syndrome, switching partners, etc. Do not read this story if you get triggered easily. If you decide to continue, that's your own choice. This story will portray a BDSM relationship, NOT counting the toxicity and genuine abuse that goes on throughout it. Do not comment anything unnecessarily judgmental, especially if you don't know what you're talking about. Thank you, enjoy. - - - - - "Don't ever do something like that again, or I will kill you, understood? "Yes, sir." - - - - - After being continuously hurt, left alone, heart broken and losing the one thing that kept her going, Nia Seymour turns to a new job that will show her how to let loose, live her life and make her happy again. The last thing she expected was to be Taken Captive by someone who would turn her life into chaos, make her addicted to the pain and hold her heart in his hands, breaking it and putting it back together over and over again until she's had enough. • • • The second he lays his eyes on her, Callum Rivera's world is turned upside down and he's made his mind up. She's his. He feeds off of the tears she cries, loves the pain all over her face when he hurts her over and over again, whether it's purposefully or not. As time passes and feelings evolve, soon enough the tears falling out of her eyes no longer give him pleasure, only pain and all he wants is for her to be happy, as long as she's with him. • • • The universe is sending challenge after challenge to these two individuals who want nothing but each other. Will they get past these secrets, lies, toxicity and pain? Or will one of them give up? - - - - -

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