The Seven Stages Of Man

This is my verson of the Shakespeare poem
The Seven Stagea of Man.
Ive never read said poem because I wanted my peoem to be original!
So it's not.... canon? I guess XD . I wanted to share my poem with you guys and please tell me your thoughts in the comments i'd love to hear what you think!!

Oh and it has a Christain aspect to it mut its very subtle but if you arent religous dont read or get offended by that
please do not give rude comments

Constructive criticism is welcomed!