The Makeover
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Last published Mon, Aug 13, 2012
There is a girl who studies at West Greenwood High School. Her name is Elenor Tinkley. She weigh about 350 pound and have two best friend. One of them is Allyson Ashbrook, who is very slim and popular. The other is Annabelle Harden, who is slim too but she is a nerd. Three of them always stay together even though there were up and down while they were studying. Elenor, had enough of all the cheerleaders and students in West Greenwood High laughing and making fun of her. So, she made a very important decision that will change her life. Slimming down. Not by taking slimming pills but doing it the healthy way. Exercising and eating healthily. Of course her friends was with her. They supported her and was even more excited than her! Will her makeover be successful? Well, find out after reading!
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