Commander of The Underground

Commander of The Underground

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Action and Thriller
It feels like we've been walking forever. This place is practically a maze. Suddenly we stop in front of a pair of black double doors. "Are you scared?" General Breek asks me. "No," I scoff. "I'm not scared of some legendary commander who's been hiding underground for years, especially if it's a girl." Breek looks me in the eye. "You should be." ------------------- *This book contains content that could be seen as offensive, such as cursing, sexual references, homosexual relationships, and comments said by characters in the book. If you find anything in the book offensive then comment and if I can take it out without ruining the story than I will (but that's probably not gonna happen).* This story involves people with powers and occasionally other physical attributes(wings, tails, etc.) For a bit of context, it's very uncommon for people to have more than one ability, and abilities can range from elemental to speed to strength to mind and more. Pretty much anything goes. People's powers typically emerge at 18 unless something happens in their childhood to trigger it. There are people who don't have powers. They aren't really in the story much though. Hope you enjoy - Statue
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As the narrator, I'm tempted to simply write "Middle Finger" because that is essentially what you'll feel like I'm giving you in telling this story. However, for the sake of not being a complete dick, I'll write a little more than just a description of a disrespectful gesture. This story can aptly be described as crude and deranged. As you may have surmised, a crazy person will be telling this story, and the characters involved are indeed also all crazy in their own special ways. So, given this exercise in mental illness, the topics touched on (in no particular order) in this tale are destruction, death, superpowered wackos, torture, pain, loneliness, chaos, the will to survive, never giving up, giving up and not giving a shit, the desire to protect, failing to protect and causing more trouble than was already present, disappointing and/or abusive parental figures, bullies, unjust punishments, just punishments, racism, violent and usually superpowered fights, sci-fi gadgets, bitterness, sarcasm, twisted and demented comedy, control or lack thereof, weird and awkward high school drama, lies and brainwashing, alien aggression, moral ambiguity, unhinged villains, fantastical weapons, a piece of shit main character, conditional friendship, a fuck load of musical references, anger, fear, depression, extra-dimensional creatures, godly powers, various esoteric connections, pop culture references, and of course, in general, superpowers.

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