Commander of The Underground
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Last published Sun, Feb 16, 2020
It feels like we've been walking forever. This place is practically a maze. Suddenly we stop in front of a pair of black double doors. "Are you scared?" General Breek asks me. "No," I scoff. "I'm not scared of some legendary commander who's been hiding underground for years, especially if it's a girl." Breek looks me in the eye. "You should be."
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*This book contains content that could be seen as offensive, such as cursing, sexual references, homosexual relationships, and comments said by characters in the book. If you find anything in the book offensive then comment and if I can take it out without ruining the story than I will (but that's probably not gonna happen).*
This story involves people with powers and occasionally other physical attributes(wings, tails, etc.) For a bit of context, it's very uncommon for people to have more than one ability, and abilities can range from elemental to speed to strength to mind and more. Pretty much anything goes. People's powers typically emerge at 18 unless something happens in their childhood to trigger it. There are people who don't have powers. They aren't really in the story much though.
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