Five Hours.
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MatureComplete Tue, Apr 9, 201910m
Do you believe in sudden friendship and could happen unexpectedly? A friendship was never bound to work.
Not until Riley and Jake met each other. And as they walked away, not looking back once, they allowed themselves to cry.
Five Hours did that to both of them.
Ps. Hi guys! skl. This story is one of our task in our HUMSS subject (Creative Writing) and I just want to publish it. Anyways, ur feel free to judge me for it may have many errors. I'm not good in grammar talaga. Happy and Enjoy reading, everyone.
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