Afterwards by Tris Prior
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Last published Sat, Jun 28, 2014
Warning: MAJOR spoiler alert if Allegiant has not yet been read (honestly, I don't blame you) ~*~Okay, so the ending of Allegiant, after Tris died, left me pretty disappointed. Actually, I felt like the whole last book was a betrayal between the reader-writer contract. I decided to write an alternate ending after David shot Tris to help myself "cope" with Allegiant. Not that this is any better, but I'm sharing this anyway ( plus I really need to post something else on here, even if it is only one page )
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