The Story of Two Lovers

Hai everyone! This is my first time writing a story, so it might be really bad, sorry :/
Anyway, this story is dedicated to my friends Rebecca and Dennis, who have an undying love for each other and please feel free to comment rennis! Thank you! :))
(Becca, if you see this, I'm sorry >;D), kind of)
And also, please check out my Rebecca's story: Ramen for Two!