Kripted Motel
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Last published Fri, Apr 19, 2019
Are we doomed to repeat the same mistakes for all of eternity? Are we in control of our own destiny, or do we just wait for the inevitable? When the only way to break the cycle is to face your monster, are you strong enough for the awakening?
This is the first part in a several part short story. I haven't written something like this before, so any feedback would be much appreciated! Feel free to let me know what you liked, what you didn't like, and any tips for what I could do better! Thanks so much!
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