Dark, Darker, Yet Darker
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Last published Wed, Apr 17, 2019
Warning: This is a continuation of the Undertale Pacifist Route. Don't read unless you have completed the game and unlocked the true ending. Have a good time ;)
Life is great on the Surface for residents of the Underground. Well, except for the random people falling into their house.
When a mysterious, strange-looking Doppelgänger appears in their home with no memory and a mysterious voice in his head, will he earn their trust and find answers to his past, or will he be left to suffer alone?
Meanwhile, the voice in his head isn't giving anything away, except for one thing: his name.
Can the Underfamily solve the puzzles that this newcomer is setting up for them? They have so many questions he can't answer:
What's his name?
Where does he come from?
Why did the voice choose him?
Why does he seem to freak out every time he sees Papyrus?
Why does he have an angry rivalry with Sans?
Why did he just appear out of Flowey's head?
And finally, what's he even doing here?
This newcomer sets tensions high amongst the family, and they all find themselves trapped in a web of lies, with only a suspicious "Entry Number 17" to guide them.
Will they find the truth and send their new friend home? Or will they ultimately fail and leave 10 to die, along with countless others?
All characters belong to Toby Fox! I only own the story line! ;)
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