Evolved
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Ongoing, First published Apr 17, 2019
Ivy is a normal girl in a normal small town except for the fact that she has an identical twin. After getting in a fight with her sister she goes to a friend's house only to find her sister has disappeared and no one remembers her. Now Ivy must fight for her life as the same forces that took her sister try to take Ivy as well.

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*note: this is a rough edit and I know it will not be perfect. This is the first draft of my story and I would love any notes on any major or minor story flaws*
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