The Updated Crimson Decay Test Chapters
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Hi all, I'm back, and I have rewritten the first 8 chapters of the story (which has equated to about 10,000 extra words in total) and I just wanted to get some feedback as to whether these new chapters sound better than the originals that i had written back when I was about 14-ish?
No pressure, don't have to read and i will most likely take this down after a while (I don't know how long it will take me to edit ALL chapters and I don't want to keep people waiting for on a story that may never get fully updated... Anyway, if you do read it; i hope you enjoy!
(Yes, this will be mature, I have grown up and now feel comfortable getting into more detail with... things)
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