Uhh, no name yet?

Uh, this is pretty awkward to explain, but this is the first book of a series, and a rough draft. So right now, its on its first draft, so please dont take it seriously until I update it to the second draft. Honestly Im just making it up as I go along, I work better that way; making it up as I write then scrubbing out the flaws and adding details later. I keep losing all my physical and digital copies somehow, and this wasnt supposed to go up until Id finished the second draft, but, yeah... Anywho, I um, should explain. This is a Reverse Men in Black taking place in an alternate 2025, where an anti government organisation is working against a rogue government to prove aliens exist, while aliens are working with the government to enslave Earth. Uh, its sci fi mixed with urban fantasy, what I like to call lo-fi, but um... for now, save your constructive criticism, since it's only the first draft, I dont care HOW it turns out, as Ill go back and clean it up for the Second Draft, when I would appreciate peer review. I guess suggestions or ideas are good tho. Or, if you REALLY feel offended, pm me and explain what offends you (African Americans dont REALLY act that way [though I live pretty close to Baltimore, so while I dont know for sure, I am familiar with their culture and ways of life, so I may not be 100% accurate, being from a "priviledged white family", hopefully I can get as close as I can], so if you say that then tell me how they DO act in such given, I can help) that will be my only exception to the constructive criticism rule.