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Hidden Beneath the Surface
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Ongoing, First published Jun 28, 2014
After the fall of once a great country, a new country was born from the ashes of the destroyed. It was no longer the brilliant 50 stars, but a country that became one. Under a new name and new requirements all citizens are to take a legionary evaluation that will determine where they'll be placed. There are two departments: D.O.A. and D.O.S. Those with scores higher than average will be placed in either of these departments. The rest are to live their lives as if this evaluation never happened. They are injected with a serum that makes them willing to tell the agents (dressed in white) anything. When they wake up they won't remember anything. 
The nation wants its own people to defend their country and to keep Legion safe from war, spies, bombings,  killing, etc. Legion's citizens are willing to risk their lives to keep their government and country safe.
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The Hawaiian Special Forces

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This is the story I'm writing for NaNoWriMo 2015. The goal: 50,000 word RAW draft written entirely in the month of November. Unlike most of my stories, which I prefer to edit before posting, I'm actually going to post updates to this at the end of each day in chapter-sized chunks. The idea behind this story is that a terrorist attack in the near future causes the US to go hyper-isolationist, to the point that it abandons Hawaii and Alaska to fend for themselves. They do, forming the United Pacific States (maybe with a few other island countries). Hawaii then goes on to turn itself into the new world police with stealthy, genetically modified cyber-soldiers. I'm marking this story as mature because there will be action scenes, and probably some interesting perspectives on nudity and relationships. I'm not planning on anything explicit, but this won't be a kids book. Validated winner at 50,040 words!