Three Cheers For the Sweet Ghost of You

I've been a huge fan of My Chemical Romance since I know myself as a person, and I always thought that each album, if we put them together would tell a whole story... Then a year ago, I decided to write and draw a comic about it, I left it when I heard My Chem had split and now I found it again in my brain box and decided to actually write it...
Please, I inform you now that english is not my native language, you can tell by my other works and my profile so... Be patient with my mistakes :)
Thank you very much