OC Review - "Revolution"
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I review the OC "Revolution" as requested.
Link to original: https://www.deviantart.com/mawairu/art/Revolution-Blue-2019-ref-bio-in-desc-794222282
Mawairu said their grit level was a 10! This means the review will be extremely brutal, possibly with a few roasts.
!! DO NOT WITCH HUNT MAWAIRU even if the results end up bad. They were so sweet about everything when requesting, and do not deserve to he hated on for one OC. !!
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