a long time ago deep in heart of the sun life began to spring the first sun heart with the ability to control the heat of the sun, one planet out of the solar sistem he chose to inhabit, springing forth the nation of the sun heart, and there he trained the people, the ways of the sun heart,
i looked into the face of the enemy, his heart was made of pure stone, no amount of light could light up the dark amiss, years and years, made him rot more and more, there was no reviving him, no..no...........light left in him, he was gone, the hardest challenge, in my life, nothing would've prepared me for this moment, he unsheath's his sword and strikes,
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author: nlocke1
editer: harolocke3
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insperation, a dream,
cover by: (unknown)
Not a love triangle!
Saakshi
"Are you dumb?" I blurted out, my frustration making my words harsher than I intended.
The man looked up, "No, I'm not" irritation clear in his voice.
As our eyes locked, I couldn't look away. Now that his cap and glasses were off, He was effortlessly attractive.
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A drunken man came out of nowhere, He clutched my wrist. I tried all possible ways to free myself from him but everything is in vain he's too strong.
The next second punch landed on his face.
Ric! He is the knight I was looking for.
I thought it was just an attraction, but now I realize it was much more.
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3rd person
In solitude, Ric reflected on Mia, recalling her warm smile, laughter, and the deep connection they shared. He wondered if she felt the same way about him, uncertain of her feelings.
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Mia shared things about Ric that Saakshi didn't know. Saakshi realized Ric had feelings for Mia, which broke her heart. She never expected her first love to turn out like this.
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Ric
I saw my woman laughing with a blind date guy, and jealousy hit me. I hid behind a tree, hoping to hear their conversation. Desperate, I asked a kid with chocolates to interrupt them.
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Who's "my woman" in this context?
Who's ending up with whom ?
Who's gonna success in their first' love?
What if destiny makes our choices?
What if life gives u a second chance?
Is it possible to forget the first love and live with the people we meant for real?
Since, 2000 characters are allowed, I tried my best to minimize the description