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unfinished and broken.

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Parts 25
Time 7m

Reads 873
Votes 204
Parts 25
Time 7m

Mature

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the beach has always been memorable for Her. 
the question remains-good or bad?
join Her as she relives the ups and down of the journey called life
through heartbreak, through angst, through pain, through hurt, 
will her soul be able to emerge unscathed and whole through this hell?

cover looks cliche, the title is cliche and even the first few stanzas may be cliche.
but i promise the storyline is anything but cliche

it's a single poem, and each chapter is a different stanza.
first attempt at a long poem (ballad, is it?)

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One Thousand Tears

I've tried to release this pain in so many different ways; But writing about you seems to be one of my faves. I don't understand how I find closure When I know it only lasts until the poem is over. Somehow it feels like some sort of imaginary relief to my reality. As if, the pain I feel only exists until the words are free. I know how crazy it may seem Because the heartbreak will always be there; And I will never un-feel what you've done to me.