don't let me down
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Last published Tue, Apr 30, 2019
She's an average teenage girl. That's how the main characters always are, right? Your average, dorky high schooler with hormonal issues and an urge to break the rules. Eliza Perkins, a C-minus 15-year-old with no motivation, couldn't be any farther from average. With an ability to know what'll happen next and a best friend who never seems to know the difference between right or wrong, you'd think she's insane. She is, in a way. After all, what sane person can predict everything that happens to them before it occurs? Her best friend, Finny Nyren, is practically the yin to her yang. He's always getting himself into something he'll regret later on, and Eliza's barely managed to keep him from getting too deep into anything.
November 22 is when that changes. He gets himself caught in a vile situation, and it seems there's no way Eliza can prevent it. The day repeats itself, and days turn into weeks and then into what feels like years. She's stuck in an endless loop with no end in sight.
Despite finding seemingly no way to stop this cycle, Eliza has one goal: she won't let Finny down.
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