Rewriting Naruto Shippuden
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The story is about me and my sister going through and nitpicking the details and rewriting scenes, characters, or arcs that are often complained about. Things like Sakura's character and lack of character arc, the lack of screen time for certain characters, the end ships, and the overall fear factor of the Akatsuki. We put a lot of work into this so we hope you like it.
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