Divergent: Four
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This story is gonna be in Four's perspective and I know that there is a book officially out for that reason but I still want to make my own. I didn't read the book that is in his perspective by Roth. Everything is Roth's. I just typed it in Four's perspective.
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My name is Tobias Eaton. I am currently living with my abusive father ever since I was young in Abnegation. My mom left me at a young age and she's factionless now.
I am 16 years old and today is the day I get to choose whether I stay with my dad or go to another faction. I am leaving him to go to Dauntless.
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All I noticed was a blur shape of gray. I didn't know who she was until her hand grabbed mine out of all the odds. Her warmth ness from her hands heats up my frozen hand. The moment she looked up, all I knew in that time was how insistent her eyes were. So demanding, so brave, so beautiful.
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