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Bonjour à tous mes amis écrivains, ici j'aimerais vous donner un coup de pouce pour la rédaction de vos histoires et vous donner mon avis sur quelques chapitres. Si vous êtes intéressés il vous suffit de vous abonner à mon profil et de m'envoyer un message avec tout les détails demandés à la première page. Et si vous vous demandez où est l'arnaque ? et bien il n'y en a pas je souhaite simplement apporter mon aide et m'occuper pendant l'écriture de mon histoire.
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