Othila.
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Last published Thu, Nov 21, 2019
Víctor, un joven de 16 años se ve envuelto en una tortuosa realidad que cobra vida en sus sueños. Luego de que en un accidente en el hospital central los pacientes enloquecieran, víctor intentara descifrar los secretos de la catástrofe y averiguar la causa de este extraño suceso para evitar enfrentar la realidad de la muerte de su abuelo, pero cuando lo consigue se ve inmerso en un su mayor pesadilla y se desatan por completo sus peores traumas.
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