The Closed Mind
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  • Reads 757
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  • Parts 32
  • Time 2h 29m
Complete, First published May 13, 2019
**COMPLETED**
Coronation: Book 1- The Closed Mind

After an unfortunate night, Jason Elliott Marfil learns he wasn't human. This newfound discovery leads him into an adventure that will change his life forever,

Prequel to Book 2 - The Runaway Crown
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