Darkness Sets In
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We all wonder where our minds go when we're in a coma. We all wonder if that person can hear us, if they can feel our touch. What do they see? What do they hear? What do they feel? This is a short story about a teenage girl who has found herself in a coma. You don't know why she's in a coma. You do not know what happened to get her in this position, but you do know that she's trapped inside her mind. with all of these worries and anxieties and fears and horrors that lurk around every dark corner.
What will happen?
Will she die?
Or be woken up by something she would rather die before she remembered?
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