Melody Falls
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Last published Thu, Nov 17, 2022
This book is basically the "script" to a comic which my friend and I are in the process of creating. So I'd love your honest feedback on chapter 1 and if the results are good and you guys give constructive criticism then I'll be happy to write more. Think of it as a sneak peek to an awesome new comic. 😊 You guys should also check out our other story by Kevon Johnson.
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