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Complete, First published May 20, 2019
Mature
My name is Delaney and this is my story. I feel compelled to give you fair warning before you embark on my journey. It's messy. It's chock-full of terrible choices and split-second decisions filled with bad judgment. It's rough, complicated and angsty-but, hey, isn't that what real life is? You live and learn through experience. You (hopefully) mature and don't make the same mistakes twice. These, however, are tough lessons to learn when you're trying to navigate through. Sure, dear reader, you will have ideas of how I could've handled it all better-I know I certainly do, in retrospect. But, I'm me. I'm human. And to err is human, right? Isn't that the popular quote people love to use as an excuse? Well-there it is. Read my life story, I dare you, but remember you've been warned.

The divorce of her parents does not come as a surprise to Delaney, however her mother's swift decision to relocate to Florida throws her for a loop. After enrolling in classes at university, she makes fast friends with Shane, the quintessentially perfect guy. Jaded by her past experiences with relationships, Shane completely confounds her. He represents everything Delaney believed didn't exist in real life; stability, security and good old-fashioned kindness. It should be effortless. With Shane, it's exactly the type of happily-ever-after story she loves to read, as well as write. 

Enter Fin: the edgy, risk-taking artist that unrelentingly captivates her attention. Soon after becoming her partner in literature class, he becomes her one and only copyeditor and most trusted confidant. Torn between two different worlds, Delaney stumbles through a range of decisions that lead her on an unexpected journey. She finds herself left with an impossible choice: A life of contentedness filled with ease and love or a passion-filled wild ride that leaves her breathless. However, Delaney also discovers that sometimes the seemingly unimportant everyday decisions end up making the choices for you...
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First Love

23 parts Ongoing

Separated at 15, Rose and Ryle's love was tested by time. Ten years later, fate brings them together again. Can their first love become their forever love, or will destiny tear them apart once more? Dive into "First Love" and find out if true love really conquers all. ---------------------------------------------------------- In the high-stakes world of high school, Rose and Ryle stood out from their peers. Rose was a bold and ambitious girl with dreams of making a name for herself, while Ryle, the troubled son of a billionaire, was searching for genuine connections amidst the pressures of his privileged life. Their worlds collided by chance, sparking an unexpected friendship that quickly deepened into something more. Both disillusioned by the superficiality of typical teenage relationships, they found solace and understanding in each other. As their bond grew stronger, they navigated the ups and downs of young love, discovering what it means to truly care for someone. But destiny had some other plans. They underwent a painful separation. Years later, Rose has achieved her dream of becoming a doctor, and Ryle continues to struggle with his family's expectations and past secrets. A trip to a secluded island with friends, where both of them meet accidentally, brings new challenges and revelations, testing their relationship like never before. In "First Love," I have weaved a heartfelt tale of love, loyalty, and the enduring power of a connection that could stand the test of time. Will Rose and Ryle's love survive the trials they face, proving that first love can indeed be forever?