The Imperfectionist
- LECTURAS 210
- Votos 17
- Partes 1
Concluida jue, jun 20, 202412m
A lonely girl decides whether or not to tell the truth of how she got her scar.
Awards:
Massive Magazine Short Fiction Award - First place
Massey University top first year short story
This is the short story version of my first full novel I wrote at fifteen. I may post the full version at a later date.
Cover by Tahiwi Trenor-Hunt (It relates more to the novel than the short) Message me if you want to see more if his work!
Todos los derechos reservados
#37
notallareheroes
Únete a la comunidad narrativa más grandeObtén recomendaciones personalizadas de historias, guarda tus favoritas en tu biblioteca, y comenta y vota para hacer crecer tu comunidad.
Quizás también te guste
Craving Them (Book 1 - SAMPLE)
Print and ebook formats are now live on Amazon! !!THIS IS JUST A SAMPLE!! Kaspian Reynolds, more commonly known as Kas, is a playboy with a dark past. He's been through hell and come out the other side, but he wasn't the same. Especially without them. Andrea Rivers, aka Andi, has scars that run deep literally and metaphorically. She's broken and everyone knows it. Her nightmares haunt her awake and asleep. Except for when she's with them. Bryce Crowe is Andi's best friend and has been in love with her for years, but she doesn't know. He's lethal and has his own demons but she holds his heart without exception. Until him. ****WARNING:**** This story contains subjects that may be a trigger for some readers such as explicit drug/alcohol abuse and graphic sexual content. Strong language and some violence.Concluida
The Secrets We Carry
Adam would do anything for his sister Olivia, including protecting her from the monster that roams within their home. James lives with his mother and stepdad. He's never had an easy life, his stepdad has made sure of that. We all have secrets we keep, scars we bare. These three quickly learn they share the same secrets and carry the same burden. Leaning on each other and their group of close friends, they try to navigate through their lives. Their friendship and strength is what will help get them through what seems to be the impossible. Story contains triggers for some readers and heavy topics such as, Abuse Alcoholism Suicidal thoughtsConcluida
Broken Until You
[COMPLETED] Autumn Cross is now in 12th grade at her new school, Willington High, with only one goal in mind: passing the 12th grade and going to a good college. But her world changes when she meets Ryder Becker. Ryder Becker is one of the most popular boys in all of Willington High. I mean, all the boys want to be him and all the girls worship him. He could care less about grades because he knows that football is what's going to get him into a good college. But his carelessness in grades changes when he meets Autumn. Not only does Autumn get partnered up with Ryder for the biggest class project of the whole year, she also lives on the same street as him. In the beginning she thinks it's a total curse, but maybe it's a blessing in disguise... They both may pretend on the outside that they are fine, but truth be told, they are both broken. The way his smile doesn't match his sad eyes draws her towards him, and the scars and bruises on her skin draw him towards her. A cure for your sadness could be another person, right? Well put her broken pieces together with his, and you have cracked the code. Love could put their broken pieces back together. ----------------------------------- A sky full of stars and he was still staring at me. "Why are you staring like that?" I asked him. "You scare me, Autumn." Ryder admitted. "How come?" He looked down at the grass beneath us then back at me and gulped. "Because I want to tell you secrets I'm too scared to admit to myself." ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 🤍I wrote this when I was around 13-14 (i'm 19 now) so some chapters may be cringy but I am too lazy to rewrite them, and still so many people enjoy this book and i'm truly grateful! But sorry in advance for scenes that may seem unrealistically cringe...I was young and naive. But anyways,enjoy the book (hoping to write more books in the future)🤍 Highest rank: 2019 #1 scars 03/12 #7 love 04/30 #4 romance 06/07 #1 highschool 06/07 #5 teen fiction 06/09 #1 cute 06/15 #1 loversConcluida
I Will Save You ✔
Haley Jacobs is not your typical teenager. Her once perfect life, long gone. She has gone through hell and back, and is barely hanging on by a thread. She's not only running from her past, but she is also running away from Him. Haley is strong girl and wants to be loved, but can't let people in due to fear from her past. Haley starts a new school hoping to stay invisible, but nothing ever goes her way. She is thrown in to a group with the school's five bad boys making people notice her. They slowly break her walls down revealing secrets that she is so desperate to hide. With each secret that is revealed, her life and those around her, are in danger. Will they still look at her the same once they know her past? What will happen to her if He finds her? #1 in hiding on 4/21/2020 #1 in hiding on 3/7/2020-3/22/2020 #2 in hiding on 2/27/2020 & 3/23/2020 #35 in Teen Fiction on 8/25/2020 #688 in Young Adult on 8/25/2020 #2 in boys on 12/20/2020 This book was formerly named "The Girl With the Dead Eyes" (**Please give this book a chance. I'm not great at writing summaries.**) This story contains sensitive content. I do not go into extreme detail though. This story does contain foul language. Please read at your own risk**Concluida
This Side Of Me
Sara I am standing in front of the place I once called home, but it all changed in one night. Now I don't want to enter. It is my hell on earth, but still my reality, and I have to accept it because no one can save me from this hole. Not even myself. Asher Black is the enigmatic, popular guy at school, known for his grumpy demeanor and strong family connections. His father owns multiple businesses, making Asher a figure of both admiration and fear. Enter Sarah, a new transfer student who's been assigned to him for a tour. Little does she know, her presence has caught the attention of those who view her as mere entertainment. All Sarah wants is to graduate and escape her own personal hell. But as Asher's world collides with hers, will her life take a turn for better or worse? Will secrets unravel, revealing hidden truths about both of them? The only way to find out is to dive into their story.
The street-fighting nerd
Meet Raven Night. She's 17. At school, she gets bullied because she's a "nerd". No one knows her past and she tends to keep it that way. During the day she is the nerd of the school. But at night she is the infamous street-fighter and racer, "Diablo". When she's not fighting or racing, she is the assassin "Death". Here's a little bit of her past, when she was 7 she watched her family get murdered in front of her. After that, she was sent to foster home after foster home. She was adopted by a man when she was 13. He is part of the second-most dangerous gang in the world. He hurts her for fun but she's afraid to try and stop him. Now meet Jacob William. He's 18. He and his other two friends just moved to town. When Jacob and his two friends(Michael & Caden) first arrived at Rosewood high, Raven was away on a mission. Jacob is a gang leader while Michael is his third-in-command and Caden is his second-in-command. Jacob had a dark past so he's cold to anyone that's not friends or family. Will Jacob and Raven open up to each other or will they hate each other? Find out in The street-fighting nerd. ⚠️⚠️This story has mature language and scenes. There will be murder and gore in this book. I will have LGBTQ+ people in this book. If you do not like this, DO NOT READ IT.⚠️⚠️ You have been warned.Concluida![Holding Back [COMPLETED]](https://img.wattpad.com/cover/145686156-256-k319302.jpg)
Holding Back [COMPLETED]
"I love how this book is turning out!😍 Not cliche at all!" - i_hatecliche "We might live next door to each other," Haley said, "but we don't live in the same world." Hooking her fingers around her backpack straps, she walked away from Jace. She had barely gone a few steps before he was at her side again. "What makes you believe we don't live in the same world?" he asked. "As far as I can tell, we do." "No, we don't. I'm...me and you're Jace Cortez. The dream of every girl. The friend to every guy. The star of the school. Girls. Sports. You're the ultimate player." "It sounds like you have a preconceived notion of who I am." "And it's one that has yet to be proven wrong." From books and a lifetime of sitting on the sidelines, Haley is convinced she knows how the world works, specifically high school. Everyone has a label and a box they fit in. This knowledge, paired with parents who are fighting, a brother leaving soon for college and a best friend who moved away has made her decide to never get involved. It will take being forced to work with her fellow juniors on a project, a boy next door with a infectious smile, a star gazer with an adorable puppy, and an unlikely pair of fangirls to make her see how truly wrong she was about everything. "IT'S NOT CLICHÉ!!!" - Moria987 "This is the reason y I keep coming back to this book...It's simply a breathtaking journey" - mariyamsajorawala "I don't usually comment but this is one of the best books I've read here. I love the fact that it's realistic and focuses on things that really hinder human interaction, perceptions and stereotypes." - yurfavegal "just gets better and better. How are all your characters 3D! Like this writing is so beautiful" - CrazyStarChick "Reading it for the second time, and the book still brings a smile to my face 😆" - grumpymood "She's practically Carter's twin 😂😂" - Guardian_21 #1 Breakingcliches #1 Arrogant #6 in Teen RomanceConcluida
SOLACE (condensed version)
This is not a happy, feel-good story. This is a story of heartbreak, of a person being utterly destroyed. However, it is also a story of true friendship and loyalty, of finding oneself, of unwavering love. It is a story of keeping promises, no matter how much it kills you to keep them. (Not my cover photo) Condensed and more succinct version of previous story Bit of an 'origin story' to Hiraeth (WIP) which shows how much grief can interfere with living your life. TW: mental illness, death, abuse, suicide, drug abuse, violence, assault, sexual assault This novel is told from the perspective of Alex - as she grows up with her best friend, Andy. It follows 15 years of friendship, in the format of monthly journal entries. Andy and Alex's teen angst evolves into harsh adult realities, but they always have each other. It shines a light on a lot of prevalent issues in society: addiction, stalking, assault, abuse, mental illness, and the ever-present grief of losing loved ones. Andy and Alex never get the timing right in their love for one another, and often drift apart as a result - but they can always find each other again.Concluida
Snow Blooms The Perfect Rose
You will definitely enjoy this story if you like fairy tales. This is my first novel. Please forgive the minor mistakes and comment so that I can do better next time.Concluida
Girl in Pain | {old version}
[Winner of The Fiction Awards 2018] [2nd place winner of the New Writer's Award] Sometimes even the purest souls are full of darkness. And sometimes the past haunts its victims until there's nothing left. Sometimes they have to fight against their bullies to survive. But what if this time the girl is not alone? Copyright 2016-2021 S.O.Simons All rights reserved. !!! new edited & improved version available clicking on the external link or on my Inkitt profile SOSimons !!! __________✧__________ Highest ranking: #44 in Short Story (24.05.18) #2 - nomorebullying (22.05.18) | #4 - shortstory (19.05.18) | #1 - sad (21.05.18) | #1 - numb (26.05.18) | #1 - grieving (06.06.18) | #5 - memory (14.07.18) | #5 - amnesia (15.08.18) | #155 - loneliness (24.05.20)Concluida
Print and ebook formats are now live on Amazon! !!THIS IS JUST A SAMPLE!! Kaspian Reynolds, more commonly known as Kas, is a playboy with a dark past. He's been through hell and come out the other side, but he wasn't the same. Especially without them. Andrea Rivers, aka Andi, has scars that run deep literally and metaphorically. She's broken and everyone knows it. Her nightmares haunt her awake and asleep. Except for when she's with them. Bryce Crowe is Andi's best friend and has been in love with her for years, but she doesn't know. He's lethal and has his own demons but she holds his heart without exception. Until him. ****WARNING:**** This story contains subjects that may be a trigger for some readers such as explicit drug/alcohol abuse and graphic sexual content. Strong language and some violence.
Más detallesPautas de Contenido