Modern/Supernatural/Teen Fiction
Who says that demons are evil; why do people think of evil as a dominant force that good fights with it's all to repel. Why do people think that evil is on top; when Hell is below you -Leo-
Luka Grace lived as a normal kid in the UK, everything except for a single mysterious event in his past is completely average. After being brought to the verge of death on a school bus, Luka is unwillingly dragged into a world that he doesn't understand, the only person he knows that might understand refuses to tell him anything. So he lives in a world he can't understand; using unnatural powers to survive and thrive in his new reality.
All mysteries shall be revealed and more shall be created as each new Ether chapter is released, Enjoy!
I'm planning to release a chapter of Ether every few days. what I'm looking for are simply opinions in my writing and how you all think I can improve.
"Clearly, I didn't want anyone involved."
"When are you going to realize you shouldn't do things all by yourself?"
"When it proves untrue."
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Since the paranormal world banded together, the teenagers have worried about school and finding their potential soulmates. However, when humans are on the verge of discovering their existence, a new enemy leaves them watching their backs. Sephora Parker had been doing so all her life. Amongst the humans' discovery, the young teen found herself free of one demon to join the real world that was going into hiding itself. When she learned how the world ended where it was, Sephora's shoulders felt heavy with her knowledge. Being a stubborn, independent person, the girl doubles down on her resolve when the world she knows crumbles beneath her feet. What else could she do when her mere birth had done enough? Why involve people in matters that will not affect them otherwise? Not worth it, is it?
First draft, please let me know any feedback you have!