Right Mistakes.
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  • Reads 516
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  • Parts 10
  • Time 55m
Ongoing, First published May 26, 2019
Mature
Rain is just your not so normal straight 'A' student from Crimson High. 

The most prestigious school in Crimson Peak.

It all began on a Monday morning. During her third semester in 12th Grade she finds herself drawn to the new boy.

Derek Nathan, she knew she wasn't attracted to him, she just felt a connection.

Is there actually a connection or is it just a girl falling for a boy?



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 *A sneak peek*

I sat down on the floor in front of  them and looked at them like a nervous child and said "I can still hear you guys talking, you know, do you care to explain" Referring to River in particular.

"And please don't tell me I'm crazy I've heard that one before" I added.



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