Didn't we almost have it all?

All my life, I was concentrated on being the best. The best in sports, the best in academics, in everything that mattered to my parents. Until I met him, I never realized how much they had me under their control. But then I moved to Boston, to study at Harvard. I always dreamed of studying there and meeting new people, who would be just like me. When I arrived, I found out that I had an amazing room, which I shared with two other girls. They were both the same and so different from me. I was a bookworm, an introvert who never went to big parties and concentrated on school. Don't get me wrong, I was always confident and knew what I wanted, how I looked, I just didn't like people. They were the kind of girls that went to party every weekend, loved groups of people and spent their parent's money without a second thought. We became good friends they took me in and changed me. Everything went fine, until the day I met Nathaniel. From that moment on, my life became chaotic. The same time, I was never happier or my life was the opposite it ever was. I became free.

This is actually my first published story. If you have anything to correct or that bothers you, just tell me. Thank you for reading this, I hope I can entertain you.
XOXO Helena