OKAY!! Ako na talaga ang pabago-bago ng isip! Hindi ko na lang ilalagay yung description o kaya prologue. Minsan kasi nagiging spoiler din sa magiging flow ng story eh. hahaha!
Saka bilang mambabasa, aaminin ko, minsan binabase ko sa description o kaya yung prologue kung itutuloy ko pa bang basahin o hindi na. Syempre minsan di naman kagandahan yung prologue. Kaya ang nangyayari, hindi na itutuloy yung pag babasa. Pero hindi natin alam, maganda naman pala yung story. Medyo fail lang sa prologue. May iba naman na ang ganda ng prologue pero puchu puchu naman yung istorya.
Pero depende pa din naman yan sa manunulat. hehehe
Meron kasing iba na tagalang magaling! Nabibilib talaga ako! Mula prologue hanggang matapos ang ganda pa din. (Wish ko lang ganun din ako. wahaha)
Paalala lang, first story ko to. Meaning, hindi ako masyadong magaling. Trip trip ko lang to sa totoo lang. At ako din yung tao na pag may sinumulan, di tinanatapos. Pero iibahin ko na yun. hahaha.. Malapit nanaman mag bagong taon. Kelangan ko na mag bago. Di ko na dapat hintayin ang 2013.
Basahin nyo naman to. Parang awa nyo na haha.. open din ako sa suggestions and errrthing.
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Mabait po pala ako! HAHA chos!
Mars Ochoco wishes for nothing but to have her treasured first kiss with her crush, Ezekiel Bautista. Just as she thought her chance finally came, her first kiss was snatched by some random classmate of hers. Can that kiss be voided? Can she confidently say she's just practicing her first real kiss?
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When ditzy Mars Ochoco got herself rejected by her long-time crush, Ezekiel Bautista, fate brought her heartbroken self to her dashing but arrogant classmate, Mark Villareal. He offers Mars an unconventional deal that she can't seem to refuse: teaching her how to kiss to help her win her crush back. But can Mars really trust a deal where she has nothing to lose but everything to gain?
Disclaimer: This story is in Taglish.
Cover Design by Rayne Mariano