The Commander's Unexpected Love
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Rose Elizabeth Diana Ramirez, a 22 yrs.old girl has seen the worst phase of her life, when she was abandoned by her own family. Just because of pursuing her dreams of singing. Find out on how a unique girl, who fought her struggles with the help of her 3 awesome brothers not connected-by-blood,but by heart.
But what's this! She's the first woman who took an oath to become the first youngest military chief of her country...
But as bold and fierce this woman was,as cheeky and cute little cupid sister/friend she was.........
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