Drowning

Drowning

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Sophie is a girl who is depressed, she doesn't know love: her mom is an alcoholic, she has no friends and her father left her. There isn't anything left for her on earth so she decides to commit suicide and jumps of a bridge. But what goes through her head before the light goes off? She sees a dream with her in the main role of a life she could never have on earth. What would that perfect dream be? What has become of her mom? How will she be at the age of twenty-five, thirty, fifty? I entered this story for the freshman15s short story contest.
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SOOO we obviously didn't make the deadline lol. This story is unfinished and will remain that way. This is the best example of a rushed concept with no actual plot lol. I wrote blind and hated most of what I had written. I've redesigned this concept and I'm rewriting it with a stronger concept and a laid-out plot. I will release the rewrite when it's done. I'm keeping this published so I can look back at my growth and so others can also see the transformation if they are interested. [ROUND THREE QUALIFIER] Simone's family is her life until she is called as one of the hundred winners given a chance at a new life. When Simone Moss enters the Healthy Human Dome, she is pushed into a deadly game that challenges her in every way possible. While this dark game is filled with blood, it also forces her to face her inner demons and grow in unexpected ways. "Every life you take raises the price of your own. Are you worth more than any of them?" This is my entry to the 2021 Open Novella Contest. Thank you for reading, commenting, and voting. This is my first story outside of fantasy as well as my first 3rd person story. Good or bad, I'd love to hear what you think, it'll help me grow as a writer.

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