The Carousel Murder
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Last published Wed, Jan 8, 2020
The Carnival is a place where kids, families and friends usually hang out for fun. A place where we can play games, have rides, eat cotton candy and popcorn and drink soda. Everything!
Until a murder happened. A man is found dead on the carousel. The place is shut down until the crime is solved.
Two detectives were assigned to solve this case. They thought this is an easy one. Too bad, they're both wrong.
Will they find the reason behind this murder?
Will they find the clues they need?
Will they even catch the killer?
But if the killer starts to hunt them, to shut them up for good. Can they even solve the case without getting killed? Can they serve the justice?
Find out yourself.
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