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[OLD. OLD OLD OLD] What's Wrong? | Marx X Magolor
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Ongoing, First published May 31, 2019
[THIS IS ONE OF MY VERY, VERY OLD PIECES. DO BE WARNED, IT IS ASS.]

Years after his battle with Kirby, Marx is sure there's nothing wrong with him. He's certain about it. But when Magolor continues to ask about Marx's recent strange behavior, things get a bit...

...out of hand.

[No cover, because I couldn't find one. Thinking of drawing it.]
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