Keratin Curse

My friend and I maybe want to make a comic, I just want to see if it gets attention first. I'm going to be posting a "pilot" chapter and see how much attention it gets.
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The saying "All Men Are Created Equal" couldn't be more wrong, at least not here. My name is Zel, and I'm a brunette, like all the other brunettes in this world, I live in the slums, trying my hardest to survive.

We live under a feudal system that has to do with hair color. The two emperors are both Albion, from what we know, their magic is the most matured and powerful. Next are the lords and ladies, they are all red heads, the knights are always blondies, as a brunette these three status' are ones I can't cross with. The towns people and 'smiths are ravenettes, and then obviously the peasantry is us brunettes.

There are exceptions to the system, for example if you're anything other then straight, an orphan or "diseased" you are forced into the slums. There isn't much reason for those people being in the slums other then them being outcasts, hell, their magic level is still the same as all the other blondes or gingers.

So I say, "All men are created equal, my ass."

Oh and as for the magic I use, I was so "lucky" to be born without it.
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